Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do a different kind of jobs. Do you agree or disagree?
Changing profession at mid-age is always a debatable topic. It is argued by a significant number of individuals that modification in a profession is more appropriate for a candidate in the career once in a life and do a variety of duties. In my opinion, I disagree, the transfer of jobs from one field to another can have more negative outcomes as compared to benefits therefore, I believe it should be avoided.
To begin with, a single career for the long run is beneficial for an individual to become master in that particular field, therefore people should avoid the steps of changing career. Many years of experience develop the skills and talent of an individual. In addition to that, it boosts the confidence of a candidate to make bold decisions during critical conditions for those reasons managers are paid high salaries as compared with staff employees. Therefore changing profession is not fruitful in terms of experience as the candidate has to start from the base in another profession.
Secondly, changing career can show adverse impacts on career growth and mentally challenge to an employee. Different jobs have different work cultures, therefore, changing profession means a person has to change his style of working which candidate may find difficult to adopt and also, change in a job does not add value for another profession. Therefore changing career does not add a profitable result for the candidate as well as for the organization, hence this step should not be considered as healthier for professionals.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the notion because of the various drawbacks mentioned in the above paragraphs and believe that professions must be chosen wisely after consulting experts at the start of a journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14982578397 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98081536352 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.571114442 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194086844016 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705960820368 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557034745925 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105314888522 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397965865539 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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