Some people believe that parents should teach their children to become good members of society. Others think that schools should do it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays education plays astronomical role in construction of ones personality.Group of people opine that this should be done by school.however,i,hold the view that is the responsibility of guardians as well as teachers of children.This essay will analyse both factor.
Being good person relies on some lacture which are taken from out side of school.Fristly,how to behave in front of elder one is depent on perental menners which are observed by childeren from ther parents.Secondly,it is quite a task for school to teach all the qualities apart from usefull as well as therotical skills which consums pletora of time and do not allow space for sports ,so it whould be fruitfull if parants focous on more rather then institutions interms of moral education
On the other hand,some of the fectors point towards the school for theching quality manners.In the beginning,these day and age, education expance is kissing sky and to fullfill all requirement perents have to work day and night which leads to lake of time in maintaining children's personality so they dipend on school.what is more,even perents dont have idea about how to take care of children due to lake of perental skill so their only.hope is such institute which can help out from hard days.yet it does not mean that tacking care of child is only on one shoulder
To put into nutshell by pendown i can say that moral education delivers ethistic appil to ones personality.As ler my point of view ,perents and institute they both should shere responsibility of educating child well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08235294118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25065633807 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 127.0 20.2975951904 626% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 506.0 49.4020404114 1024% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 648.0 106.682146367 607% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 127.5 20.7667163134 614% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 51.0 7.06120827912 722% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147480701949 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128522223874 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0149745047833 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917276319229 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307820558148 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 66.2 13.0946893788 506% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -57.43 50.2224549098 -114% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 52.8 11.3001002004 467% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.96 8.58950901804 163% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 52.8 10.1190380762 522% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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