The following appeared in a health magazine published in Corpora.
"Medical experts say that only one-quarter of Corpora's citizens meet the current standards for adequate physical fitness, even though twenty years ago, one-half of all of Corpora's citizens met the standards as then defined. But these experts are mistaken when they suggest that spending too much time using computers has caused a decline in fitness. Since overall fitness levels are highest in regions of Corpora where levels of computer ownership are also highest, it is clear that using computers has not made citizens less physically fit. Instead, as shown by this year's unusually low expenditures on fitness-related products and services, the recent decline in the economy is most likely the cause, and fitness levels will improve when the economy does."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument given in the magazine is based on lot of assumptions. In start of the argument it assume that medical experts are able to cover all the population of corpora for test of physical fitness. May be it is possible that they do not cover all the population and it was one fourth of population they were able to test that was found fit. Because if that is the case then we cannot compare these results from previous results and statistics are wrong. Also same case can also happen twenty years ago since then it was more difficult to test large people in less amount of time due to lack in technologies and reach. So it can happen that many people that were not fit was not even tested back. Hence if we do not consider all these assumptions then there is serious flaw in these statistics.
It also assumes that current and twenty year back fitness standard are comparable. Obviously they are not. After that when argument is stated that experts were mistaken, it is also based on assumption that computer is owned by that people who are overall physically. It is possible that less percentage of people who are overall fit buys the computer and more percentage of people who are not overall fit buys computer. Because in this way level of computer ownership will be highest but not by the physically fit but more by unfit people. So that experts claim that spending too much on computer cause decline in health may be true .
In the last of argument first it assume that if people buy fitness related products or services then they will actually use it regularly to improve their health. Many people are like that they do not use these services regularly even if they buy it. And so their health will not be improved. After that it assumes that decline in economy causes that people are not buying these fitness products, as they will be costly and not affordable. This is not true as there can be many reasons that people are not buying fitness product apart from being costly. Some of them can be because many people are not interested in doing regular exercise. Or due to daily and hectic life people are not getting time for all these activities and in their leisure time simply want to relax rather doing exercise by these products. Hence it is not true that when economy will improve then actually fitness products sale will increase.
In this way there are serious flaws in this arguments based in these assumptions.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 434 350
No. of Characters: 1970 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.564 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.539 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.234 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.25 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.29 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.461 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'assumes'?
Suggestion: assumes
...sumptions. In start of the argument it assume that medical experts are able to cover...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons. In start of the argument it assume that medical experts are able to cover a...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...f corpora for test of physical fitness. May be it is possible that they do not cover a...
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Line 1, column 460, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...vious results and statistics are wrong. Also same case can also happen twenty years...
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Suggestion:
...re wrong. Also same case can also happen twenty years ago since then it was more ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
... were not fit was not even tested back. Hence if we do not consider all these assumpt...
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... these assumptions then there is serious flaw in these statistics. It also assum...
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...hysically fit but more by unfit people. So that experts claim that spending too much on...
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...uter cause decline in health may be true . In the last of argument first it assum...
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...rue . In the last of argument first it assume that if people buy fitness related prod...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...ther doing exercise by these products. Hence it is not true that when economy will i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.6327345309 194% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 13.6137724551 191% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 28.8173652695 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 434.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61751152074 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31024074793 2.78398813304 83% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410138248848 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9485205924 57.8364921388 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.70786347227 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 6.88822355289 174% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920180075836 0.218282227539 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323939898203 0.0743258471296 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479427282353 0.0701772020484 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057092011535 0.128457276422 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484779164329 0.0628817314937 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.3799401198 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.5979740519 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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