Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
laws are implemented by the government for maintaince of the society and its betterment. following various justified laws helps in safety of individuals living in the society and so we should follow these laws. But at the same time some laws, that are implemented by government or by some lower local bodies of society or by a certain group of people in society, are not justified and are based on a orthodox thinking of that group. Such laws are being forced on other members of society which create a very negative environment and hence we should not follow these unjustified laws.
so I totally agree with the given statement that it is the responsibility of the society to obey just laws. For example traffic related rules in every city must be followed sincerely if we want to avoid any kind of small or big accidents from happening. And if each and every member of society will follow the traffic rules diligently then we can prevent most of the accidents happening today in every city. so rules like this must be followed. also laws related to prevent our national and public properties from damaging must also be followed with full efforts. like in every historic sites or public place there are laws which says we should not write on walls or should not litter around these places etc. these laws should be followed because it helps us to maintain dignity of out public places and historic sites which gives a good impression to tourists who came to visit.
In the same way there are rules created by some orthodox group of people in society that are fully unjustified and we should resist or even protest against them. For example, recently there was a news that in south india there are many temples in which woman are not allowed to enter and worship there. laws or rules like this are ridiculous and we should resist them. also many other rules related to lower caste people in our society which prevents them from eating or living in the same place as other higher caste people should also be banned. even in india caste system laws as whole are completely unjustified in my opinion we all should resist them since every person is equal and should have equal status apart from all these discriminations.
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- Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, apart from, for example, kind of, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70256410256 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38508955859 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4931110488 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076203884168 0.243740707755 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320413936067 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333448363552 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566464030595 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200095277242 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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