Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
The world has witnesses many inventions, some were great, some were significant and some were not so visible. it is well known, that the greatest of the inventions were focussed on the most needed human problems and they have benefitted the majority of the population. Be it the invention of Alternating current, which took Tesla 40 years of dedicated research or be the evolution of mobile phones. In the light of the proposed recommendation, I agree that the researchers should focus their research on areas that are most beneficial to the majority of the people.
Let's take an instance of one of the greatest inventions of all time, the wheel. In ancient era, people used to cover lengths of distance because of no means of transportation. this resulted in the loss of physical tenacity as well as a significant amount of time. The whole manking benefitted with the invention of the wheel. Though the people who invented it may not be technically termed as scientists or reseachers but they did play a vital role in solving one of the toughest problem statements surrounding the human life. The wheel of the modern era has evolved enormously and is made up of a lot of alloys and is almost used in each and every means of transportation, be it bullet trains or cars.
Apart from this, let's navigate our focus onto the medical research. Flipping through the pages of medical history, one can easily notice that the medicine industry has always addressed the most widely spread diseases, which has affected the majority of the population. Be it the reseach for polio, or cancer medications. Now, let's assume that the entire creamy layer of scientists or researchers cease to work on medications for cancer, AIDS or any other disease whose medication is not that prevalent in the society and is also, not cent percent effective but instead, shift their focus entirely on some rare disease which has infected only a handful of people. that would certainly not pay off well for the major portion of the human race.
Similarly, let's talk about the research in the field of communication. The world has witnessed the remarkable transformation from a wired landline phone to a dual screen dual SIM light weight mobile handset with 24*7 connectivity to the internet. The evolution of data from 2G to 3g, 3g to 4g and soon from 4g to 5G technology, has touched almost every other field of research that has benefitted almost every person on this planet. Be it an driver, whose only source of income is based on driving a car for an APP based company (like Uber) with the help of another company, that helps him navigate (Google), both making use of high speed data connectivities or be it a data scientist who is working on determining the shape and size of a black hole.
However, research in the fields of space science and missions for inter planetory life, doesn't directly benefit most of the human race as far as the present needs are concerned. but, one can simply not overlook the importance in research in these areas given the fast depletion of Earth's natural resources, due to various factors including overpopulation.
In the end, it's true that the scientists/researchers must have a vision and a foresight for the needs of human civilzation that might be visible in the future, but the majority of the focus should be in line to the current needs and requirements, which would benefit the majority of the human population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, well, apart from, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3098.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 601.0 442.535393258 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15474209651 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95129289623 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.09958239825 2.79657885939 147% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512479201331 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 944.1 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.1062983845 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.695652174 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1304347826 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251259602274 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692582451924 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912052821017 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117303978422 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718008606703 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 100.480337079 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.