Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve. Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
should people involve in big decisions that can change the country entirely? I partially agree with the statement. The government officials should not have the ultimate power to create policies that can change the country entirely. but all the people should not get to vote in such policies which are not their expertise. The policies should be decided by government officials after consulting with the experts.
The successful person in politics is likely to have foresight. they have vision about the situation they going to face in next some years. this is what makes them successful. many the normal people living in countries are unable to see the consequence of their action. they take decisions based on what they can gain in near future. they fail to see larger picture of their decisions. if such people vote for government policies, the country is not likely to flourish in longer time of period. so, only experts should be involved in such decisions.
For example, Recently there was a terror attack in Pulwama, india. The indians blamed pakistan for this attack on indian military personals. many indians wanted india to go on war against pakistan. so such people take decisions based on their emotions and fail to see consequence of a war. In next several decades, the country with superior economy will be entitled as super power. The military powers will not be considered as super powers. if india go to war with pakistan, it will certainly damage the indian economy. The country will suffer with many blows like increasing poverty and unemployments.
but, the government should not have ultimate power. The absolute power can corrupt anyone. so there should be some rules in constitution that some intellectuals can be reverted the government policies. if not, the government officials can impose whatever they want, more like communists. For example, in many countries the judicial processes are isolated from the politics. if people find the government policy not beneficiary to country, he can sue against such policy and can put their point on the table to think about. if there is policies are related to normal people, the politicians cannot prejudice the situation of the people living such life. In such policies the experts or normal people related to policies should be involved.
To sum up this, the critical policies of country like policies on foreign affairs, war etcetera should involve only intellectuals and experts. such policies can’t be decided on the bases of emotions and myopia. but in policies which address to common people, the common people representative should get to vote.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1511627907 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62947987503 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448837209302 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8695166972 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.21875 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4375 23.4991977007 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.09375 5.21951772744 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225181153076 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643181641312 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519697619467 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143210411293 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549452435984 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 14.1392134831 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.