Some people think that giving aid to poor countries has positive effects, while others believe that international aid should be stopped. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
there has always been a debate among people that whether to make a change when faced with unsatisfactory situations. some people prefer to withstand the bad things, while others would rather take some actions to get out of such situations.
The reasons for withstanding the suffering situation may involve the recognition that someone who acts hastily is unable to stay calm and make decisions carefully when confronted with difficulties. By contrast, those who have chosen not to change immediately may save a lot of trouble. they tend to be more considerate, which is of great importance in daily life, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of enduring hardship. For instance, someone who is tired of mountains of work may still work hard and refuse to resign, because he knows that this hard period will be over soon and he will be appreciated by his betters for his diligent performance.
The obvious argument in its favor is that acting to improve the situations is a more positive attitude towards life than doing nothing. acting positively can bring about lots of opportunities, which might exert a profound impact on the rest of your life, and unlike just accepting the situation and doing nothing, taking some actions is also a good chance to improve your ability in aspects of working as well as managing your own life.
From my perspective, I advocate struggling for a better life and I believe that sticking to the present situation means that the unknown risks are not affordable. they prefer a more stable life. However, if there were a better social welfare system which can improve people’s security, those in bad situations would be more likely to make a change actively, rather than just praying and waiting passively.
- Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- In many countries, average life expectancy has been increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and for society as a whole? Suggest some solutions. 78
- The chart below show how frequently people in the USA ate in the fast food restaurants vetween 2003 and 2013. 67
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak 11
- The charts below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02721088435 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73979116786 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4067286416 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112236249996 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390283804302 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386312561671 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679524902385 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269410001754 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.