The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of the honey bees.
Overall, it can be seen that the average life cycle lasts from 34 to 36 days. There are five main stages in this process, starting from the laying the eggs and finishing with the maturity of the bees.
In more details, the process begins when the adult female bee lays an egg. Typically, every three months the females lay from 1 to 2 eggs, which then hatch from 9-10 days. An immature appears.
At the third step of the process, this insect grows bigger in size for the first time 5 days later, and then the second time on 7th day. After that, the nymph moults for the last time on 9th day before emerging to become a young adult bee. Finally, it takes 4 days to reach of the maturity stage and the process can be repeated now.
- Some people think companies should employ old people to work as they have a lot of working experience. Others, however, think it is better to recruit young people.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people think that it is better for students to learn local history than world history.Do you agree or disagree? 60
- Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (such as the environment). Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- The picture illustrates the university application process. 56
- The diagram shows the consumption of renewable energy in the USA from 1949-2008. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: bigger
... step of the process, this insect grows bigger in size for the first time 5 days later, and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35416666667 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98867113566 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5371608514 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.375 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160600091706 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900722085752 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159974239905 0.0843802449381 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165008711222 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196912804458 0.0819641961636 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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