It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages.
chang is law of nature.trying new method can bring more effective results.group of people ,hold the view, experimenting various thing could be fruitfull while other opinne,it is more time consuming and unnecessary.As per the my side,change is mostly benifitial.
There are some points avalable in side of change.First of all,we never no what is good enough for particular activity without switching to others so chang is very essential for better result.Additionaly.one can gain more knowledge in fild because every stap reqired different process which can lead to the better result.what is more,it can save many resources.As an epitome,if production company continues pursuing only one production method it could be more time as well as capital consuming.
On the other hand,some arungue against change.Fristly,change could be more harmful than same methods like living healthy life style, charity and so on.If that person decide about changing the attitude than it is no long good.Furthermore,it is very risky stap to take which contains tones of uncertainty.no one knows what whould be the result yet they have to take stap agains nature.As an instance,many famous personalities became more successful just by changing their shecdual which cost them little effort.Still it dosent mean that chang is not necessary
To putinto nutshall by pan down i can say that,change has two side results which can lead to success or failure but it is most important stap that one should try new things.As per my point of view change has more pros than it's own cones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, well, while, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29317269076 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27823037728 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678714859438 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 20.2975951904 409% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.793015187 49.4020404114 447% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 439.333333333 106.682146367 412% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.0 20.7667163134 400% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.6666666667 7.06120827912 519% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196104156711 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141729899475 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587185312269 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133297503488 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428895448913 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.0 13.0946893788 344% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.77 50.2224549098 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 11.3001002004 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.88 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.1190380762 348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 36.0 10.7795591182 334% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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