Young people enjoy life more than the older people do. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support you answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Neighborhood
The neighborhood we live in is very important for us. We have lived in this city for 25 years when I was born and spent all of time of my life in this neighborhood. Some residents agree with addition a new movie theater in neighborhood, others disagree with it. In my view, the addition the movie theater will be beneficial for two reasons.
The main reason is that the addition will decrease crime in the neighborhood. In order to build the movie theater add new jobs that its will reduces crimes and be advantageous for city. For instance, when I was elementary school, some of rebellious youth in my neighborhood bother kids. I and kids always was anxiety when we went to school lonely. when I grew and married I was worried about my children until the movie theater. The theater could add many jobs for all people. In addition, all of people tried to use more this situation for obtain more money. In addition, the jobs caused to decreased crime in my neighborhood. As you can see, these people wouldn't have had more peacefulness if it weren't for the addition of the movie theater.
The another reason is that, the movie theater added jobs. this make us more fun and pleasure. For example, my brother preferred spend all of his time in home because there isn't place for fun. He was bored and upset and wailed to our parent that we go to another city where have more entertainment place. Fortunately, we hesitated what we did the city announced they built the theater. This event caused he gained job and entertained more. This experience taught me that new places are very advantageous for all of people.
In sum,though some may oppose the plan, a new movie theater would be a great addition to my hometown or any other city. Not only will the addition generate more fun and pleasure for residents but also the decreasing crime could help the city provide more peaceful. Every city should introduce downtown and fun place into community.
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- TPO5 Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific theories discussed the reading passage. 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: When
... anxiety when we went to school lonely. when I grew and married I was worry about my...
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Message: Did you mean 'worried'?
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...l lonely. when I grew and married I was worry about my children until the movie theat...
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Suggestion: add
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69275362319 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59410735797 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515942028986 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7309035031 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3913043478 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21739130435 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744400957018 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258592392987 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393971231564 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485667220587 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224517830483 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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