It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of changes outweigh the disadvantages.
It is undeniable fact is that change is crucial part of life to people rather than trying to unchanged. Despite a few negatives of this approach, this certainly is a positive trend. Clearly it seems to me that the merits of variation in our life outweigh its drawbacks.
To embark with, the evidences are plenty to prove why change is imperative to masses in the life. The mammoth recognisable fact is that since people are unable to grow in the future without changes, they have to adopt changes to attain life's goal. Changing life's routine could be worthwhile to us because it conferres a ton of opportunities in order to achieve success. People who retain unchanged their life, frequently proceed towards the drawback. For example, as per a recent survey, American news magazine had made a decision that complete changed and improve their life.
On the other hand, some people found that changes entail a risk of life. They feel that changes can prove worst to their life and they determine their own destiny. To put it on the another way, if all initiatives are made in proper way, change will be made for the better. To illustrate, co founder of Facebook mark Zuckerberg started his project when he was studying at harvard but then he dropped out in 2003 in order to complete his project, resulting he becomes richest person due to unafraid of changes. Therefore, people need to adopt changes in the life.
To sum up, change is much important in the life. Albeit there are a few risks, it could be prove more beneficial to the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (co) must be used with a third-person verb: 'founders'.
Suggestion: founders
... made for the better. To illustrate, co founder of Facebook mark Zuckerberg started his...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'becomes the richest'.
Suggestion: becomes the richest
...r to complete his project, resulting he becomes richest person due to unafraid of changes. Ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73703703704 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51623262275 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596296296296 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1329305118 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191034045987 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075720653155 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521881857607 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124876836661 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00707791290192 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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