You borrowed some books from your school/college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library and explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear Madam,
My name is Harsimran Singh and I am a student of MBBS 4th year in your college. I am writing this letter to inform you that I borrowed two books from the library on 22nd of July, 2019 that is Anatomy & Physiology by Ross and Wilson and another book named Research and Publishing by Khullar. The return date of these books is on 12th August 2019 but I will not able to give it back on time.
The reason for this is that my uncle is hospitalized due to severe pain in his stomach. He has no one to take care of at home as his both children are living in Australia. Yesterday I had a call from my father that you have to visit your uncle and live there for a few days his health get improved.
I would like to request you to allow me to deposit these books after the due date and I am also ready to pay the late deposit fine.
I shall be very thankful to you.
Yours Sincerely,
Harsimran Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2019'.
Suggestion: July 2019
...d two books from the library on 22nd of July, 2019 that is Anatomy & Physiology by Ross an...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lso ready to pay the late deposit fine. I shall be very thankful to you. You...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1843575419 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18198997406 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6427818946 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217555882483 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788207250288 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648168439054 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119993459034 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449967918358 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.