You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-introduce yourself -explain what is wrong with the furni

Dear Nikhil,
I am your tenant of C-25 Torronto property, I am staying here from last 15 days and writing a letter to inform you about the condition of the furniture kept at resident.

I live with my full family having 4 people and 2 kids, feeling uncomfortable as the table and the chairs are broken and have to be changed as repairing in not possible and looks odd. The almirah door have to be fixed having no locks and hooks.

I would like you to send a carpenter for the repair work and change the broken furniture as it is considered unfavorable as per astrology. There is no sitting place at my home if some guest visit.

Therefore, I request you to please do the needful or I will not pay the 3 months rent as per the rent agreement.

Your sincerely
Hunny

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Nikhil, I am your tenant of C-25 Torronto proper...
^^^^
Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people and 2 kids, feeling uncomfortable as the table and the chairs are broken a...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 638.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43055555556 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49718205381 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680555555556 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6944601402 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187980646522 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765711442147 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545696947716 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857634321529 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401625808812 0.0580467560999 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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