Now-a-days, Media is getting advanced day by day. Kids get familiar about the new product with the help of advertising. Some say that publishing about the new product is beneficial while some are againt it. It is a matter of discussion among all abouth the same.
Digital media play a wide role in making people aware about the new things available in the market with the help of TV, radio etc. Last year, Akshay Kumar worked in the movie "Padman" which helped in women understanding about the necessity of using the pads, 80% increase in usage was confirmed in 1 month. These kind of advertising with the help of celebrities, it could increase understanding about the advantages and knowledge among people.
On the other hand, media also promote the sale of unnecessary items which are not required like online shopping. The sale in online application like Flipkart and Amazon have increased the purchasing power of people, they also buy the things which are not in need. For example make up kit, the girls buy it as it's available in sale at discounted price without knowing the brand of the creams inside. Discounts are given to sell the things which are defective and are not selling in the market.
In my opinion, the shopping should be done as per the use and requirement of oneself rather wasting money on unnecessary products. As trend changes, the things and the competitive product would be available at the cheapest price.
- Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?Which other types of job should be highly paid? (The answer is a sample not written by myself. The goal is to compare the 56
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past.Do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
- Some say that due to heavy traffic governments need to build more roads in metropolitan cities. While others argue that this is not the right solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons and examples. 61
- Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians What are the reasons for this Is it a positive or negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ease in usage was confirmed in 1 month. These kind of advertising with the help of celebri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93495934959 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71455854211 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.943589397 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194286306481 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633804410812 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494943282941 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101594059033 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377815664727 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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