There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently.
Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter
> describe the problems
> explain how these problems are affecting the public
> suggest what changes could be made
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the bus -A122 which travels daily from Monday to Friday in Vijaya bank layout Bangalore route at 9:00 am.
I am using the bus from the last six months to travel to an office. To my great disappointment, I have never seen the bus to reach Vijay bank pick up point on time. Besides this, it is not having proper sitting facilities for daily commuters, as all seats are torn and in repair position. It's become excruciating to sit on the bus for long hours.
Most of the commuters use public transport daily to travel to their office. After facing these consistent problems, it's become quite difficult to use public transport for the same.
I would request you to look into these issues and instruct the bus conductor to start early from his place to reach on time as well as repair the old torn seats for the public so that they can seat comfortably for longs hours. Thanks for the consideration.
Yours Sincerely
Radha Kumar
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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the bus -...
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...bank layout Bangalore route at 9:00 am. I am using the bus from the last six mon...
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...gs hours. Thanks for the consideration. Yours Sincerely Radha Kumar ...
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...the consideration. Yours Sincerely Radha Kumar
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...on. Yours Sincerely Radha Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72413793103 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4323588143 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8907725383 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910982352199 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407961456586 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478408962995 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555674653167 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062482415465 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.