In the modern era, people are well aware of the impact of having different abilities and knowledge on one's future and success. Some people may hold the view that successful people are who put themselves in hard, risky situations and try to explore new things. However, others may look at this concept through a different lens. I believe that if you have deep thoughts to create new stuff and follow your dreams, certainly it will bring some superb accomplishments for you. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which aptly elucidate my viewpoint.
The first reason coming to mind that substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that the extent of individuals knowledge will be dramatically evolved, as long as they are following new stuff. Therefore, it gives rise to attain numerous prosperity. Furthermore, humans possess vary dimensions mentally and physically, and the different talents will be flourished when they take risks. From the psychological perspective, I recently read a scientific article regarding this issue, according to this research, When you put your self in a dangerous circumstance, your brain will try to accomplish better.
Another ground which deserves some words here is that one of the essential characteristics of successful people is they are thirsty for learning new items. In fact, they get bored by only doing what they know previously and repeat them over and over. They continuously investigate unexplored science to find a superior way of life and pave it for the others and the next generations. Moreover, all the inventions and explorations throughout history, have been employed by people who were brave enough to test different unique approaches.
To put it briefly, according to the reasons that mentioned above, one of the crucial factors in the way of success, is that should not afraid of trying distinctive things inasmuch as they will lead to creating new knowledge and boom our undiscovered abilities. Consequently, it is highly recommended that people should try to confront unpredictable situations in order to provide infrastructure for their future achievements.
- TPO 25 Integrated Writing Task 55
- TPO-24 - Integrated Writing Task 71
- it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 76
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 83
- Consider a situation where you asked by your supervisor to participate in a group project at work. Your supervisor wants you to work with someone who has opinion who has a very different from yours. Moreover they feel very strongly about these opinions. D 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30813953488 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05136751298 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.317577246 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.733333333 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23058993647 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671164919889 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649802495673 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130237100968 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512639558284 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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