a person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor
As stated in the argument, the need to increase funding is immutable. The author states that inexperienced professionals are resulting into dilatory and that indirectly affects the budget assigned for the movie. The author also presumes that the people coming from the advertising business have a little idea about the movie making business and does not value the time and money of other people involved in the same. Not only this, but the advertising business is also being considered as reckless and a spendthrifting one.
Firstly, considering a director from advertising business as an amateur in the movie business is not factual. It is highly possible that the director is much more than what the author presumes. He or she would be in fact more experineced with the low budget and effective outcome procedure, as, in the advertising industry time and money, both, are very constrained and limited. The director will instead be more cautious towards the resoucres being consumed and will try to engender the best possible results.
Secondly, the assistant directors and producers have to come to the sets before the actors as they have to set up the place for the shoot. Considering that whole stage and place has to be kept ready for the shoot and the actors, it is baseless to assume that the crew is unionized. In fact, the crew is the one that puts forth the most efforts in the making of a movie without even being fully recognized for the same.
In addition to this, the author gives the account of the failure of the movie due to the lack of a quality product, which however, does not seems accurate as a quality product is made by the effective use of resources and not by spending surfeit amount of funds. Also, since the crew is considered to be amateur by the author then that same crew will be more vigilant towards the wiseful spending of the resuources.
There have been so many examples where new and amateur directors have given the finest of the movies and even the established one's failed to deliver a good quality of one. Also, the experience gives a baggage to the person that might hamper the present project going on, whereas a new personnel would not have any baggage and would give one's best to receive the best.
In accordance with the above issues, it is quite difficult to sanction the need of increasing the funding for the movie. I'd request the author to look through the same and provide more accurate reasons and facts to get more funding.
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- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 33
- a person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndthrifting one. Firstly, considering a director from advertising business as ...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...uality product, which however, does not seems accurate as a quality product is made b...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...uality product, which however, does not seems accurate as a quality product is made b...
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Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'baggage'.
Suggestion: baggage
...lity of one. Also, the experience gives a baggage to the person that might hamper the pre...
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Line 11, column 122, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...f increasing the funding for the movie. Id request the author to look through the ...
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Line 11, column 125, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'requests'.
Suggestion: requests
...ncreasing the funding for the movie. Id request the author to look through the same and...
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Line 11, column 125, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'requests'.
Suggestion: requests
...ncreasing the funding for the movie. Id request the author to look through the same and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, as to, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 432.0 441.139720559 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7662037037 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51712137002 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483796296296 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 705.55239521 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2780075115 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.117647059 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4117647059 23.324526521 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.70786347227 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0172701079815 0.218282227539 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00539614420571 0.0743258471296 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0120795391326 0.0701772020484 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00873629548624 0.128457276422 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100028982655 0.0628817314937 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.3799401198 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 98.500998004 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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