Some people say that saving money is a good way and other say that spending money is the best way to enjoy life. Discuss both views and your opinion.
Although such topics likely will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on generating happiness in life by preserving our wealth or by utilising it can lead to thought-provoking discussions. Irrespective of the many arguments on either side, my view is that, saving money could be very beneficial for future prospects. Through the course of this essay, I would like to put forth my viewpoint considering both the aspects of the argument.
At the start of the career, preserving a minuscule amount of salary can lead to generation of huge wealth at a later stage in life. Further, this amount acts as a boon during emergency situations and after retirement. For instance, many Indians save lot of money during their lifetime through different retirement plans and policies, which help them secure their future. Adding to this, Economic times once mentioned, many senior citizens who had mutual fund investments during their work period were financially independent after retirement.
Moving ahead, it is also important that people enjoy their life to keep themselves rejuvenated. However, those who merely spend money may have lost their own aspirations, hence, they use money as a tool to supply fake happiness to themselves. One clear example of this is the life of Bollywood stars, who spend enormous on their lifestyle, just to overcome their loneliness. Spending money might bring enjoyment to ones life but it be for shorter.
To conclude, the habit of saving money can lead to mental peace and good fortune in longterm, which is impossible by draining money aimlessly. So, my opinion is that people must save money for better life eventually bringing peace and positivity in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22826086957 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8604630748 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3615309315 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219312246782 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823179684757 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684098253217 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139575138544 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796406987399 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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