Some people say that saving money is a good way and other say that spending money is the best way to enjoy life. Discuss both views and your opinion.
A penny saved is a penny earned is a well-known saying which is believed by some of the people although people have another opinion, the best way to get pleasure from life is to spend the money. Spending money could give a sense of pleasure but savings are a good habit, which helps to prepare for the crisis. In this essay, I will highlight both the opinions for some of the reasons.
It is popularly said that spend the money which is left after savings and not vice-a-versa. In some cultures practice of saving money is inculcated from childhood. Piggy banks were introduced to start the routine of savings. Having a cushion or backup is a tendency of humankind which prepares us for any crisis like medical emergencies. In countries like India where job markets are unstable and people cannot rely on government-aided medical services, backup is always needed. It helps us to sustain until the conditions are favorable. For example, when the recession hit many countries and banks across the world were affected, India took the blow but was still stable due to our banking system where citizens have their savings to fight the slowdown.
On the contrary, many people have a view the expenditure of money is the best way of having fun and joy in life. Life is short and unpredictable, so no one knows what could happen in the next moment. They believe to live in the moment and not to worry about rainy days. All savings are of no use when you cannot enjoy and have a comfortable life. Furthermore, old age conditions might not allow you to have fun even if you have deep pockets. In a survey, it was found that most people who worried a lot about the future and savings died unsatisfied that they spent all their life saving for the future rather than enjoying the moment.
In conclusion, money should be spent wisely and keeping in mind the adverse conditions in life. Spending money sometimes for pleasure is good although planning expenditures should be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77101449275 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5746897901 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1377433131 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331185373827 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095174616482 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994642607191 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201847185756 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111680527403 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.