Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disaster.
Do you agree or disagree?
It has been debatable for a long time that developed countries should help underdeveloped nations with humanitarian aid during natural calamity. In this essay I agree with the opinion as rich countries are monetarily strong and can help the unprivileged one without causing any stagnation to their economy, moreover, the fact cannot be denied it is the moral responsibility to help people in need and distress.
Developed nations have a strong economy; they have plenty of resources so helping any underdeveloped country will not affect its economy. A nation already destroyed by catastrophe will not have enough funds and resources to get back and run smoothly. It depends on developed countries for help. As an example, a massive earthquake hit Nepal in 2015, the country was devastated by the calamity, as Nepal is a small country with significantly limited resources many countries like India and USA came up with a helping hand. This made the country to bounce back quickly, which otherwise was a humongous task.
Secondly, it is a social responsibility to help people in need. When rich nations are helping the poor country, they are also building their bond with them. This will influence the political relationship and will help in future collaborations in business and build an alliance. It has been seen in many instances that countries solve their disputes after helping each other, as India has helped Nepal from Earthquake in 2015 that help to build strong border securities for stopping unwanted treats entering India via Nepal.
To conclude, I would state that economically rich countries should always lend a helping hand to fewer privilege nations in natural disastrous situations because we share a universal value to help each other and it will set up a good bond between the nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17627118644 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86045058255 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0026954931 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162176201447 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070417201284 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696234124626 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115775076267 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06027831998 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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