You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Dear Mr.Roberts
In context to our yesterday's discussion i want to express my interest to move to head office in New York for six months. I learnt that a new division of trainings & developement is going to start. It will be a good exposure and learning experience for me.The handson on latest technologies will help in my developement and will help to do my official job faster and smother.
As per company policy i will do the knowledge transfer after my return.This will increase our overall efficiency and productivity by implementing the new methods and technologies.I am suggesting my name as i can very easily adaptable to new enviornment and intrested in cross country learning.I am ready for all paper work and bond required for travelling.
Looking forward for your postive reply.
Thanks and Regards
Samantha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Roberts
Dear Mr.Roberts In context to our yesterdays discus...
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Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Roberts In context to our yesterdays discussion ...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...In context to our yesterdays discussion i want to express my interest to move to ...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...It will be a good exposure and learning experience for me.The handson on latest technologi...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...exposure and learning experience for me.The handson on latest technologies will hel...
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Line 5, column 23, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and smother. As per company policy i will do the knowledge transfer after my...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... the knowledge transfer after my return.This will increase our overall efficiency an...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...enting the new methods and technologies.I am suggesting my name as i can very eas...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...technologies.I am suggesting my name as i can very easily adaptable to new envior...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...and intrested in cross country learning.I am ready for all paper work and bond re...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur postive reply. Thanks and Regards Samantha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 136.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08958366113 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698529411765 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.561642154 44.8134815571 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966574069675 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04945397555 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496532222585 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823400875273 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350121338835 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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