The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of electricity which is produced and consumed in ten different countries in 2014.
Overall, it is noticeable from the chart that the production and consumption of electricity in China are by far highest. In addition, the amount of electricity produced is higher than that of consumption in almost all countries apart from Germany.
Of ten countries, China and the US produce the highest amounts of electricity with 5.398 billion and 4.099 billion kWh of electricity. At the same time, there is 1.057 billion kWh of electricity made in Russia, whereas the figures for the remaining nations are below 1.000 billion kWh.
The amount of electricity which is consumed by all ten countries is lower. In China and the US, people use 5.398 billion and 3.866 billion of kWh, respectively. In addition, Russian spend 1,038 billion kWh of electricity while the average amount of electricity consumed by citizens only ranges from 449.5 to 856.7 in these seven countries.
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- The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The diagram below shows how the parts of old car batteries are used to create new car batteries and other products. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14110429448 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85392812054 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3340136001 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169992091593 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966616403227 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614628431575 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127216108391 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486711335267 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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