the bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
This bar chart contains production and consumption data for electricity in 2004，in 10 main
countries. These countries are china, the united states, russia, Japan, India, France, Brazil,
Germany and South korea.
The most electricity was utilized in china, where more than 5,000 billion kWh electricity was
generated and consumed. The amount of production and consumption was also huge in
the united states, with the figure for generation and consumption is 4,099 and 3,866
respectively.
There was a huge gap between the other countries and the top two countries, as the
generation and consumption of electricity in the united states was at least four times as
much as former' s amount of electricity. The other countries had a production ranging
from 1,057 (russia) to 485.1 (korea, Rep.) and consumption varying from 1,038 (russia) to
449.5 (korea, Rep.).
Overall, the top two countries generated and consumed the most electricity in the world,
while the rest counties consumed much less power
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, as for, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76582278481 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81201470381 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1814051906 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212423479391 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975578111455 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06879254385 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786786026934 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707561463495 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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