Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have
insufficient control over their lives. What problems do such feelings cause for
people? What remedies could you suggest?
As human seek their life, feel of stress and the lack of self-control may emerge and become life issue. The cause of these problems appears to stem from two factors, while several remedies appear to be possible.
The major factor here tends to be the emerging pressure from circumstances of human surrounding. These could be a financial problem or working pressures. For example, the increase and the rough distribution of work load through the employees caused by company’s turmoil could affect employees performance in controlling themselves due to the working pressure they obtain. Another cause is the lack of self-management ability, meaning that some people have no knowledge about how to adjust with sudden worrying situations such as deadlines which have been already closer.
Turning to possible solution, perhaps, an obvious simple solution would be to get some activities which could relax the brain a while. For example, we could do exersices or have a time to sit in a park while enjoying the fresh air and birds sound, if we use this way, it would get rid of the feelings without spending a lot of bucks. A second remedy might be by reading some literatures related with stress-illness and self-management improvement. In addition, we could join some activity providing a consulting facilities such as mentoring. If such activity were available and affordable, we could discuss the problem we face and figure out the solution with our adviser.
In summary, the factors of external and internal of human appear to be the cause whereas a short escape from routine, learning and discussing about stress and self-management may bring out a better feeling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...in some activity providing a consulting facilities such as mentoring. If such activity wer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17279411765 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95134272416 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8684232779 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163793662957 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059495905714 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304624788069 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968146412139 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390677640913 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.