You need to do more physical exercise. Write a letter to your friend asking him to join you.
In your letter, you should tell:
• why you want to do physical exercise
• what type of physical exercise you are planning to do
• why you want your friend to join you.
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to kindly request you to join my weekly fitness program which is going to start on 24th of July in SportBox Gym in Izmir.
There are several reasons why I would like to go to gym these days. Firstly, I would like to embrace the summer in a fit body. Further, I believe that physical exercise motivates people so that it is source of positive energy. The last but not the least, I feel myself more disciplined when I go to gym regularly.
I plan to work indoors where I can do push-ups and benchpress to strengthen my biceps and triceps substantially. Apart from that I wish to do some exercise such as rowing or running with the aid of the fitness machines to increase my stamina.
I will be glad if you can join me since I know that you also plan to start working out due to your upcoming wedding in next October. Besides, if we start this weekly program together, we can encourage each other to follow the program in a regular manner in case we feel lazy or tired. A companion is essential to be disciplined in fitness, therefore we need to motivate ourselves with working together.
I look forward to hearing from you regarding my offer and hope to see you soon.
Best Wishes,
Ali Larter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a regular manner" with adverb for "regular"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ourage each other to follow the program in a regular manner in case we feel lazy or tired. A compan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, apart from, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47368421053 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49781375629 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622807017544 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4595747362 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247362333988 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712603105761 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772188278569 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124528938174 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458564190896 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.