The bar chart depict the amount of electricity generation and usage among ten leading countries in 2014. Overall, it can be seen that all countries produced more amount of electricity than their usage, except for Germany.
China is on the first place, with amount of electricity produced at 5398 billion kWh while only used 5322 billion kWh. The next was United States, which generated 4099 billion kWh electricity and utilized 3866 billion kWh. However, there is a great divergence between the first two countries and the rest eight countries, at approximately more than 3000 billion kWh.
Russia, Japan, India, and Canada were on the third, fourth, fifth, and sixth place, respectively. The generation amount were ranging from around 600 billion kWh to approximately 1000 billion kWh, while used electricity between about 490 billion kWh and 1000 billion kWh. Furthermore, Brazil and Germany had similar amount of production and consumption, at around 500 billion kWh for generation, and approximately 450 billion kWh for utilization. However, Germany produced less amount of electricity than their usage, at 526.6 billion kWh and 582.5 billion kWh, respectively. At the last place was Korea Rep. which generated 485.1 billion kWh electricity and used 449.5 billion kWh.
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 65
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- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 11
- Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, third, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.395 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74935901621 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.370106017 43.030603864 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.142857143 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0919364442376 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707728276482 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570950960213 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949049481953 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593201621012 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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