The bar chart illustrates the percentages of families that purchased and leased houses in England and Wales during 78 years. Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of owned accommodations shows an opposite trend from that of rented accommodations.
Started at 1918, families in owned accommodations stood at approximately 23 percent, and then increased to around 32 percent in 1939, before remained steady in 1953. After that, it started to increase significantly to approximately 68 percent in 1991, before made a slight increase in 2001 to around 69 percent. However, there was a decrease in 2011, to about 65 percent.
Households in rented accommodations began at around 76 percent, more than three times higher than the owned accommodations in 1918. In 1939, it then dropped to around 68 percent, before became unchanged in 1953. After that, there were significant decreases from 1961, until it finally reached approximately 32 percent in 1991. Furthermore, in 2001, it fell slightly to around 31 percent, before started to rise again in 2011 to around 38 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25433526012 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10632202555 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57225433526 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.07073170732 654% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2634522685 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13561069939 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660008335879 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656818312415 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116119153887 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712987842662 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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