In this modern world, people can go to the bank and have business without face to face interaction anymore. What are the effects of this to the individuals and to the society? What is your opinion?
With the innovations of banking, there are those people who are able to make transactions without having to interact with the bank tellers. Modern technology has made it possible for the society and affects their financial experience.
The good thing about banking now is that everything can be done with the automated teller machine (ATM). As more people are provided with their debit cards, they are able to use it to make fast transactions which do not need to be done in front of a teller. Furthermore, time and effort will be saved on the part of the account holder there is no more waiting on cue for one to be served. Transactions such as cash deposits, withdrawals, account transfers and other self-service options are instantly done through other methods such as online and mobile banking. As a result, customers are able to have a comfortable banking experience.
However, the backdrop of having an automated teller machine is the heightened security risk on the part of the society. This is due to a more likability of breaching the security features of the ATM, which jeopardizes anyone making a transaction at any time of the day. Aside from this, other crimes and violence have increased the moment the ATM and other methods of banking were introduced. In fact, Some have been victimized by robbery, theft and killing while using the ATM. Because of these, some of them have opted to make a transaction inside the bank with a teller.
To conclude, although innovations in the banking experience have made it possible for some customers to make a transaction without being inside the branch, I do hold the same view. There are some transactions which needed to be done with a teller so an individual is secured with his finances.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, while, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87248322148 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73653551748 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520134228188 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4828265463 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126251613648 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507603907429 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360724411256 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907484586041 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395252980194 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.