You recently ordered online and you are not happy with delivery. Write a letter to the manager and
Describe what was missing in the delivery
Explain the importance of the items
Ask for replacement
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the items I received yesterday. This delivery order is of huge value to me, so I would like you to exchange these items on early basis.
The order which I placed was a pair of wool socks and gloves through online service at your website. It was an extreme disappointment to see that the parcel received by me did not include the pair of gloves.This came to me as an utter disappointment.
These items are essential for me because I need to take them with me on my up coming trip to Northern areas. Therefore, it is crucial to make it convenient that the delivery arrive till coming Monday.
I hope that you will deliver me these essential things as per order placed at the website. It would be great if you could substitute this order with the demand I submitted at the site.
I look forward to seeing your prompt reply in the matter.
Yours faithfully,
Syed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...y me did not include the pair of gloves.This came to me as an utter disappointment. ...
^^^^
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ply in the matter. Yours faithfully, Syed.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57058823529 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67851247258 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7772643359 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146150358752 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530225139433 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470341656658 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725817745611 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518835297773 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.