Chorleywood village development (Rewrite Part 5)
The map shows the growth of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and 1994.
It is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure was improved. Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the motorway.
From 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood covered a small area next to one of the main roads. Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area. The village grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and 1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built crossing this area from west to east. Chorleywood station is in this part of the village.
The expansion of Chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside the railway line until 1970. At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the village took place around motorway intersections with the railway and one of the main roads.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-10-13 | Hanabi | 61 | view |
| 2022-07-31 | ansh_123 | 76 | view |
| 2022-06-20 | mary.ssherr | 73 | view |
| 2022-06-01 | 0935670471 | 84 | view |
| 2021-12-26 | Awadhesh Mourya | 67 | view |
- The diagrams on the right shows two types of building design that help reduce the effects of earthquakes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.-Syerapke- (rewrite) 65
- In many countries there has been an increase in social problems involving teenagers in recent years Many people believe that this is due to modern lifestyles because parents spend more and more time at work and have less time to supervise their children T 10
- Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Why is this happening Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks 64
- Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. 85
- The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 74
the village grew as the transport infrastructure was improved
Description: two verbs in one sentence
flaws:
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0 0.12
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 174 200
No. of Characters: 780 1000
No. of Different Words: 81 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.632 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.483 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.5 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 42 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.667 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.453 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.691 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4