You recently ordered something online When the delivery came it was not complete Write a letter to the company In your letter explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery explain the importance of this delivery ask for a replacement it

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You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter:
explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery
explain the importance of this delivery
ask for a replacement item to be sent

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Bhawna Sharma, and I am writing in order to complain about the incomplete order that I received through your portal.

I recently ordered a Samsung A20 mobile phone with order id ‘AM78798’ during your ongoing Diwali sale and the same was delivered to me on 22nd Oct 2019. However, when I opened the case, I found the charger missing from the accessories. Moreover, the earphones that were shipped along with the phone does not seem to be working.

The mobile phone had a very special purpose as it was bought as a surprise Diwali gift for my father and the faulty delivery from your end has made all the efforts go down in vain. I am highly disappointed with this kind of service from an esteemed organization like yours. This negligence on your part has made the purchase unworthy.

To avoid further embarrassment, I would suggest you to kindly send me a replacement of this product at the earliest.

I look forward to receiving a replacement.

Yours faithfully,
Bhawna Sharma

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92571428571 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89570547606 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6152286564 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251304547038 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803446764736 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483138889107 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104442589908 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056514530544 0.0580467560999 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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