Dear Sir,
I am writing in order to express my concerns over the current room-sharing arrangement.
I am currently staying in a double-bedded room in ‘Madam Curie’ hostel and facing privacy issues. Firstly, the current setup of the rooms does not allow enough space for an individual and to add to this, this limited space has to be shared between two. To make matter worse, my current roommate is a gregarious person and her big friend circle finds our room to be a party spot. Since I am currently preparing for UPSC examination, I find this constant noise and disturbances unbearable. Though I have personally put forward my grievances but that have mostly fallen upon the deaf ears.
Therefore, I request you to kindly change my accommodation to a single bedded room and update me about the increased charges. I do not wish to lose my valuable time further and request you to make the arrangements at the earliest.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, look, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91712042865 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682634730539 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2149206298 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148831807605 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580415905121 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451534464129 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989825180573 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041620915346 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.