Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Now a days, everyone is in rush to earn money and defeat others in race of life. All of us want to reach on the top as soon as possible, for that it is important to do work quickly than others. sometimes rushing in work may result into a disastrous failure that we spend more time to correct them. so, according to me it's important to work slowly to make sure everything is going perfect.
Firstly, when we are in hurry to finish any work it might result into a terrible mistake, that sometimes can't be corrected. because of that we always feel a guilt from inside. For example, During my 8th grade's exam I was in a rush to finish my paper before my friends, and because of that I forgot to solve few questions of that paper. when result came out I've got very low percents in that exam than my friends.
Secondly, when we do some work in a hurry, it might not be of good quality, and looks imperfect. For instance, when there was a party at our home and I was cooking all the party food by myself. I was trying to finish it faster but it resulted into little bit burnt and raw food and improperly seasoned and no body liked it, and than we took everyone to restaurant.
third reason for my opinion is, work done with patients and concentration always results best. when we learn something it takes time and devotion to become perfect. All scientist do their work with patients and dedication and after research of several months to years, they come up with a formula or treatment method that helps humanity to live better and longer.
As conclusion I want to say that, working slowly with patients results as a sweet fruit and and there is a famous saying that 'Haste and waste'. so, do your work quickly only when you are 100% sure that it will be perfect otherwise go slow and always give your best.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37685459941 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30754096584 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.204220971 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218464956905 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729026585487 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754376916482 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129989657829 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904407572489 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.