Billions of dollars are spent on beauty business by people all over the world. This has led to develop an indifferent and passive attitude to real health needs. Do you agree or disagree with it?
In certain ways, life has become a matter of surface appeal having obscured the value of reality behind important matters. The same applies truly to external beauty having taken precedence over valuable and basic matter like health.
To look younger, smarter and gorgeous is the catch phrase of every house hold talk in life. Not to talk of Bollywood icons, the celebrities and the rich but even the poor have started to craze for artificial beauty. Physicians and surgeons are having hay day accumulating wealth with people readily willing to spend to look beautiful especially among teenagers and...
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Sentence: Similarly, the lean and feeble crave to add fat to look impressive especially like wrestlers and no wonder if they take steroid drugs to fullfill their dream just to look more impressive and dashing.
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