These days, more and more local markets are unable to challenge with chained stores and malls. Some people believe that this could have an adverse effect on local finance and will abolish local communities. My position is argued further with clarification.
Out of all the reasons, there are two main reasons why people believe that small stores will be replaced with hypermarkets. The primary argument supporting this idea is that finding a wide range of goods in superstores is easy to compare to small markets. For example, in hypermarkets, we can find clothes, home appliances, and foods, together, in contrast to local markets with limited goods. Secondly, the supermarkets provide a wide range of facilitates for comforting of customers such as car parks and food courts. The result of this is that localized markets have less popularity in some countries, which in turn leads to the death of business in regional communities.
However, it must be said there are several arguments to the contrary. The foremost reason is for buying a shortlist of daily needs it is better to shop from the local markets than finding a hypermarket. A further argument against the main idea is that in local communities, some unique goods such as traditional crafts are sold, while in the supermarkets, these goods are not available.
Thus, to conclude the discussion, it can be finally said that although the supermarkets could threat the local stores, I strongly believe that if the local community prepare themselves for competing with supermarkets, they will not disappear from the streets.
- These days, more and more local markets are unable to challenge with chained stores and malls. Some people believe that this could have an adverse effect on local finance and will abolish local communities. My position is argued further with clarification 56
- Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.To what extent do you ag 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rary. The foremost reason is for buying a shortlist of daily needs it is better to shop fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1198156682 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90570444993 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9930708127 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.444444444 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264768338628 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973647647253 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699623534838 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176300235969 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253329304284 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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