In many countries, the proportion of old people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?
It is undoubtedly that the accelerating rate of the elderly people has ushered in some pressing concerns of society as a whole. While it would certainly be easy to garner either benefits or drawbacks of this increasing, I believe that the whole development brings more negative impacts.
On the one hand, there are countless benefits of the raising of aged persons. First and for most, the older people have rich experience and knowledge in both work and life. It means that they can become a good expertise in many sectors such as education, health and financial consultants. In addition, the older generation has a positive influence on the arts and culture. Indeed, they are actively involved in the community as member of sport clubs or attend musical concerts, theatres and art galleries more frequent than younger people.
On the other hand, the pitfalls of the ageing population should not be underestimated. One striking disadvantage is that the detrimental effect of its on economics. Specifically, an elderly person might be unhealthy in their later years and may suffer from painful diseases such as arthritis, leading to become a burden on the social welfare system. Another drawback of this trend is that an increase in the older people rate will be a decrease proportion of people of the work place. To explain, there will be more people claiming benefits like state pensions and less people working and paying income taxes, causing a growth up in the dependency ratio.
In conclusion, for all the aforementioned reasons, although nobody can deny that the increase of the aging population has positively impacted to the community, this trend is simultaneously negative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...aiming benefits like state pensions and less people working and paying income taxes,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14181818182 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87149340591 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5217915268 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223689929279 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632621409714 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515127273647 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117884248706 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284731649433 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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