The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The illustrated graph provide information about Australian children’s activities which are being done in free time. From general observation of the chart, it is possible to deduce that watching tv or videos are the most favourite activities while skateboarding or rollerblading are the least liked.
it is clear from the graph that watching tv or videos are the most prevalent activities for boys and 100 percent of boys are using them. The next preferred activities electronic or computer games with 80 percent of boys. bike riding is used by about 75 percent of boys. The least activities in terms of popularity are art and craft, and skateboarding or rollerblading and the comprised less than 40 percent.
As can be seen from the graph that the percentage of girls’ watching tv or videos activities is the same as boys’ activities. The closest activities is electronic or computer games and it equals to 60 percent. The percentage of bike riding activity is the same as art and craft activities and they equal to around 55 percent. The least popular activities for girls is skateboarding or rollerblading and their percentage is approximately 25.
The illustrated graph provide information about Australian children’s activities which are being done in free time. From general observation of the chart, it is possible to deduce that watching tv or videos are the most favourite activities while skateboarding or rollerblading are the least liked.
it is clear from the graph that watching tv or videos are the most prevalent activities for boys and 100 percent of boys are using them. The next preferred activities electronic or computer games with 80 percent of boys. bike riding is used by about 75 percent of boys. The least activities in terms of popularity are art and craft, and skateboarding or rollerblading and the comprised less than 40 percent.
As can be seen from the graph that the percentage of girls’ watching tv or videos activities is the same as boys’ activities. The closest activities is electronic or computer games and it equals to 60 percent. The percentage of bike riding activity is the same as art and craft activities and they equal to around 55 percent. The least popular activities for girls is skateboarding or rollerblading and their percentage is approximately 25.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...erblading are the most widespread. it is clear from the graph that watching t...
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Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bike
...computer games with 80 percent of boys. bike riding is used by about 75 percent of b...
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Line 6, column 337, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es and they equal to around 55 percent. The least popular activities for girls is s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20526315789 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19964073468 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484210526316 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9501043114 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172764838471 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773654761042 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670270014139 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129952769033 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396017556568 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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