The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The bar graph depicts information about the proportion of children who preffered different extracurricular activities in australia.
In an overview, it can be noticed that, girls of australia have predisposition to sedentary activities more as oppose to the physical activities.
As it is apparent from the figure that, about 30 percent of boys are interested in skateboarding or rollerblading while only 15 percent of girls prefer this activity.Similarly more boys were indulged in bike riding as compared to girls which were 78 percent and 58 percent respectively. Likewise, computer games are also played by males in high proportion as oppose to females with difference of about 20 percent.
On the other hand, about 58 percent of girls likes art and craft but only 38 percent of boys prefer this indoor activity. In case of watching tv or videos both sexes liked it at equally and the highest preference is seen for this activity during spare time among the kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: AS_OPPOSE_TO_AS_OPPOSED_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as opposed to'?
Suggestion: as opposed to
...isposition to sedentary activities more as oppose to the physical activities. As it is app...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...isposition to sedentary activities more as oppose to the physical activities. As...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Similarly
...5 percent of girls prefer this activity.Similarly more boys were indulged in bike riding ...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...5 percent of girls prefer this activity.Similarly more boys were indulged in bike riding ...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: AS_OPPOSE_TO_AS_OPPOSED_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as opposed to'?
Suggestion: as opposed to
...also played by males in high proportion as oppose to females with difference of about 20 per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, similarly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11949685535 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10430720627 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3277613571 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.23603664747 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135264533272 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769594580741 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725222182879 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988296962594 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814324818158 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.