You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home,
you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat
looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.
Hello Max,
It was a wonderful time to spend last weekend in your house. The food was indeed lip-smacking, I can still smell that. The most favourite part of mine is the balcony garden. It is really wonderful place to spend evening. However, when I returned home, I discover that I left my coat containing few essential belongings in your house.
Let me tell you a brief details of my coat. So that you can be able to find it easily. Coat made with black and yellow leather with big golden button. There is a black border at the edge of collar. It has four pockets two outside and two inside. Inner pockets are containing monthly rail tickets and pendrive. As much as I remember, I left it on terrace.
I am really facing problem with regular transportation problem without monthly ticket. It would be better if you could bring my coat this Sunday Spanish tuition class then it would be really helpful for me to get it back.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me tell you a brief details of my coat. So that you can be able to find it easily. Coat...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...o outside and two inside. Inner pockets are containing monthly rail tickets and pendrive. As m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch as I remember, I left it on terrace. I am really facing problem with regular ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44697272187 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9721133388 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.7857142857 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0714285714 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248274728255 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700439538905 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873008124403 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144770812822 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509148126802 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.16 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.