Life was better when technology was simpler.
To what extent do you agree and disagree?
It argued that before the advancements in technology, life was more satisfying as compared to the recent contemporary era. However, this essay will completely disagree with the statement because it is the sole reason for better communication and improved education.
Firstly, technology has made our lives easier because of the evolution of a better communication system on the internet. This is to say that online networking applications such as WhatsApp, Skype, and Instagram have enabled people to keep in touch with their friends and family. In comparison, before the advent of these innovations people had to write letters to their kin who were living abroad, and delivery span to the respective person was so long. For instance, a survey conducted by a technology firm found that each year millions of people are joining the communication apps due to the convenience of connecting with people by a single click.
Secondly, the internet has enriched our lives with a better education system. In other words, there is a plethora of helping material for the study purpose such as the online reference books, video tutorials, and free online courses are available to help students of any grade and also for working persons. However, in the past decades, students were struggling a lot in making assignments and face trouble in preparing for the exam because of the lack of resources available to study, and they have to rely only on their curriculum books. For example, recent research conducted on the tertiary students revealed that 85% of the scholars consult material available on the internet to prepare for exams and to make assignments.
To conclude, although some would think that living was more fulfilling when technology was not evolved. However, this essay argued that this belief is completely preposterous because it has made the learning process easier and helped in connecting with people living in faraway places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80522517762 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.4862584236 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121560112957 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535452350443 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687312831581 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911709883777 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535818529879 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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