Life was better when technology was simpler.
To what extent do you agree and disagree?
It is argued that when technology was simpler, life was better. I disagree with this statement; technology makes our life easier and simpler than before. This essay shows how life becomes better by using technology.
Firstly, technology plays an essential role in our life. Not only does it make communication between family members easier but also it helps them to feel safe, even though they are far away from each other. Mobile applications and social media are assisting people to contact anyone, even if they are not in the same country. For instance, in 1998, when I was working at Gulf countries, it was hard to contact my family; however, now it is really easy to call my family anytime or see them by using mobile applications.
Secondly, the internet revolution changed the way that people got and shared information .getting information for any life aspects is faster than the old days. It is the fact that World Wide Web improves our lives by providing us with the required answers by a simple click on the keyboard. For instance, if I want to get information about something, I will go to the internet and google it. But in the past, I had to visit a library to search for books to get the needed information. Moreover, the invention of the Internet helps us in education. To illustrate, I live in Saudi Arabia; I took an online IELTS course with a teacher who lives in Egypt without the need of travelling there.
In conclusion, in the modern era, the power of technology has shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses. Which helps people on communication, education, and gaining information in the easiest ways. There is no doubt that technology makes our lives better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y that people got and shared information .getting information for any life aspects...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77441077441 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68846732692 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0881353239 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224200072898 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802724969382 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144575051693 0.0667982634062 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158184844737 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158688903393 0.056905535591 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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