write to your friend about your favourite movie
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear X,
i'm just writing to tell you class="about">about my favourite movie. it's a romantic movie called the notebook, its events runs on the 70's class="about">about a girl from a high class loves a lower class boy during summer vacation in the countryside;however, her parents refuses this relationship and suddenly thy decided to end the vcation and take her away to the city. during that vacation they had a dream to buy a specific house and paint it in white and blue. A few years later, she got engaged and he left to join the army; his father bought the bought him the house as a gift. he came back from the military and started to renew the house after losing his father. His photo appeared in the newspaper and she saw it and went back to see him. I don't want to illustrate to the end of the movie, I think you'll like it and hope to watch it together.
yours
S.A
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...s;about'>about my favourite movie. its a romantic movie called the notebook, i...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s;about'>about my favourite movie. its a romantic movie called the notebook, i...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'love'?
Suggestion: love
...ut'>about a girl from a high class loves a lower class boy during summer vacatio...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
... vcation and take her away to the city. during that vacation they had a dream to buy a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ght the bought him the house as a gift. he came back from the military and started...
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Line 3, column 770, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... she saw it and went back to see him. I dont want to illustrate to the end of the mo...
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Line 3, column 827, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...strate to the end of the movie, I think youll like it and hope to watch it together. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke it and hope to watch it together. yours ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... yours ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... yours S.A
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50920245399 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64229155601 2.54303337028 143% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2560551096 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953333515426 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683887578693 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115176031175 0.0603063233224 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132798069649 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139924807911 0.0580467560999 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.