After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to thank you took care of me during my accident; hence, I would like to thank you .
First of all,My name is Ahmed from Egypt ,I am working as a production manager in a steel factory in Jeddah. I made an accident last Friday on the high way during driving my car, and you looked after me till the ambulance car and took me to the hospital. Actually I appreciate that.
Secondly, I would like to invite you to visit me at my house, which is located on Jeddah, Herra street, Building NO.2528, Fifth floor, apartment No.5. I will be happy if you bring your family with you; we can spend a nice time togeather. I have an amazing Balacony ,so we can enjoing our time during drink tea. I belive that we will spend a good time.
Finlly, I really thank you again for you situation. I am looking to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cident; hence, I would like to thank you . First of all,My name is Ahmed f...
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...e to the hospital. Actually I appreciate that. Secondly, I would like to i...
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...me togeather. I have an amazing Balacony ,so we can enjoing our time during drink ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... can enjoing our time during drink tea. I belive that we will spend a good time. ...
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...ng from you soon. Yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42592592593 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31225683527 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679012345679 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3229352564 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 4.34317383033 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27565306047 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10639576665 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885624738726 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177669166225 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679803601275 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.