After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Mr. Albirt,
I am writing to you to express my gratitude. In the beginning, I will introduce myself, my name is Doaa, the one how you take care off after the accident had done on Monday at 2:00 am.
I want to appreciate what you have done. However, after the accident, I faced a dilemma because of two main reasons. First, I had a syncope which makes me unable even to see or hear what happening around me. Then after a while, I asked the nurse who bring me here and she told me in details and gave me your contact email. Second, the time was late, and I would not be able to contact my wife while she is looking for me, Thank you for contacting her.
I would be grateful if you visit us with your family at home. It is my pleasure to keep in touch with such a fascinating person like you.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Doaa.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-20 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 73 | view |
| 2019-10-14 | balaprasant08 | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-28 | DoaaOkaila | 56 | view |
| 2019-07-24 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-20 | uzmalik | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25301204819 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24559050831 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692771084337 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2272442112 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1818181818 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297478543205 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118232774107 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539529075696 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180685091697 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218666361237 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.