There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• de scribe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear John,
I am writing to inform you that, I am facing a kind of bad discipline in my job, because of the bus problems in over the last two weeks.
I was disappointed regarding the bus problems. In more detail the time which the bus come to my area not accurate at all previously he had been arrived at 6:00 am, but now a days he arrived between 6:10 and 6:20 am. As well as being crowded since the new school children come on it. From the previous problem it is considered to be a squalid place.
I would like to suggest to reduce from the bus driver’s salary as a type of discipline code if he does not care about the time management as well as the cleaning strategies. Lastly I request you to add another bus to the same area, which will solve the crowding problem.
Yours faithfully,
Doaa Okaila.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...sly he had been arrived at 6:00 am, but now a days he arrived between 6:10 and 6:20 am. As...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...he had been arrived at 6:00 am, but now a days he arrived between 6:10 and 6:20 am. As...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest reducing'.
Suggestion: suggest reducing
... be a squalid place. I would like to suggest to reduce from the bus driver's salary as a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, regarding, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 671.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38562091503 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5218766012 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673202614379 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9467329873 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.875 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222746855804 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915314471818 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512106075312 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145781884541 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290877571009 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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