Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express the lack of ample bus service causes Milford district inconvenince so I hope you can imporve it for all of residents around here.
I found the bus shifts are not well arranged for the Milford area. At day time, especially at morning peak time, I have to wait more that 15 minutes to catch the bus and because the long time waiting so the people are crowed, sometimes I cannot get on the bus at the first one. It happened twice recently, I was late to the office after I got on the third bus because the total waiting time over 45 minutes. The other problem is the driver cannot see us wave to him or her so it won't stop.
It bothers me a lot so I hope you can find the solutions to cope with it. Firstly, could you rearrange more shifts in the working day peak time so I am able to reach my office as earlier as I can. Secondly, please install the stop light so after I press the light swith button the bus driver can easily see and stop it for me.
Thank you for you in advance and I look forward to hearing form you.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...I am able to reach my office as earlier as I can. Secondly, please install the sto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14351851852 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10227500227 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.8033153137 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118648702313 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446637083818 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326985984139 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604957147705 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048444600287 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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