You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in connection with the letter which I received from your bank that asking me to send the acknowledge receipt of my new card. In the beginning, I will introduce myself my name is Doaa Okaila working as a general dentist. I made a new card from your bank but unfortunately, I missed it.
In more details, yesterday and after I get the card I went to the nearest restaurant with my family to take our dinner. However, after we finished and came home back I checked it but it was not in its envelope at all. Furthermore, I asked my family but no one saw it. I am feeling depressed. And up to now, we have been looking for it since I missed it. The problem is I really need it for my new job as soon as possible.
Here I would ask you what the action that you will make in order to solve this detrimental issue. And how long you will take to make a new one? If you need me to come I am all ready.
Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Doaa Okaila.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d from your bank that asking me to send the acknowledge receipt of my new card. In the beginnin...
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Line 6, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...w long you will take to make a new one? If you need me to come I am all ready. Lo...
^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Doaa Okaila.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.195 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49919487035 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6991396455 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9285714286 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334743454917 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100628779088 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10739914257 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194293926537 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109187965398 0.0580467560999 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.