A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercises and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Although, a lot of people nowadays concern about being healthy and taking good care in order to be attractive. Furthermore, to get the opportunity to be hired in a fascinating job or high position. And here we will discuss some main points about what to do and what to avoid which people do in my country. Like, keep a good diet as well as do more exercises.
On one hand, there are two major ways to be considered as a fit person. Firstly, by keeping a good diet which has a lot of protein and fewer carbs and sugar. Always have been taught that the healthy mind in the healthy body. I always recognize them trying to eat fruits and vegetables instead of cakes and chips.
Secondly, they make a plan for exercise. Three times per week. and on Friday they go either with their family or friends to a gangway to practice walking. Which will raise the connection between them and help in advance to build a creative environment and beneficial one.
On another hand, many detrimental habits they avoid them to accelerate the fitness level. Like, fast food, soft drinks, and smoking. these are examples of things make their users satisfied and happy on its time, then after that people star claiming themselves. Smoking is a very dangerous problematic habit. Its effect extended to all human around who smokes. Thus, the government makes a lot of advertisements on how to quit smoking.
In conclusion, Now the awareness of fitness is present in every country, especially the wealthy ones.
However, it is mandatory for each family member to have a role in supporting and encouraging each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Have Always been
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Suggestion: And
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Suggestion: These
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76258992806 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62377957217 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636690647482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3056531456 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177737387679 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406082225045 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549364312012 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665936336662 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852929838673 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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