You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in the brochure you posted, which is a tour in a mountains for seven days. I am very excited to be one of your team. Especially that it was a dream from my childhood, perhaps I can make it real.
However Would you please give me more details about this tour, Such as, the date from when it will starts and when it will be finished, because I have a part-time job which will begin on 12th of October till 12th of November. Furthermore, I need to know the exact budget and if can we attend part of it, or all as a must?
Although, I have an issue may it will be as a barrier for me. In more detail I am not very fit and I am not sure if can I keep it up. But I have enough enthusiasm to join you with excel.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Doaa Okaila.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in t...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a mountain' or simply 'mountains'?
Suggestion: a mountain; mountains
...brochure you posted, which is a tour in a mountains for seven days. I am very excited to be...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ldhood, perhaps I can make it real. However Would you please give me more details a...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...ur, Such as, the date from when it will starts and when it will be finished, because I...
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Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Doaa Okaila.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05780346821 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35495046807 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0477566602 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246372073653 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904360993542 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626621622459 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12131746319 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713879076797 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.