Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Although a plethora of countries have people suffering from ravenous, each one has its own ways to deal with them. This essay will discuss in more details, the causes of world poverty as well as how to help them. In order to secure them and deal with them as normal people.
Firstly, one of the major reasons is that they are educationally poor, they do not have high certifications or other languages except their mother tongue. And nowadays a lot of company searching for employees who have a high degree and self-caring as well. Thus why they cannot work in any place they wish to. Secondly, some wealthy people concern about building new farming, markets, and housing. Furthermore, they will ignore these kinds of human.
On another hand, we have many ways which can help them be satisfied. Like, increase the awareness of wealthy members to give this who suffer from destitute more attention. By either give them the opportunity to have a role in the country then they will gain money which will be enough for their responsibilities. Also by building special apartments for them even, they contain the basic number of rooms and bedrooms as possible. Lastly, governments can arrange a specific fixed salary for them per month. To save them from begging.
In conclusion, It is a responsibility of all to help the poor people and support them by encouraging them to work and to help them self to be better in society. And the benefits for sure will return back to the same country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... a high degree and self-caring as well. Thus why they cannot work in any place they ...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...l be enough for their responsibilities. Also by building special apartments for them...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...society. And the benefits for sure will return back to the same country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79457364341 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62043310758 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3998140871 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3125 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206124006336 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603884152457 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513180536964 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126573350802 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381816478036 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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